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Music playing Stables the sound of the phone ringing,

 

• The horse's attention is going to be in the camera, going to be in the camera going to be looking at camera

• Median shots of the horse

• We see the background

• We can see the opening credits

 

Close up of the horse's face to show all his heavy breathing  I want to show everything the horse face has to offer.  the music lowers down and stops to hear the deep breathing of the horse.  a slight movement of the horse's head. ( to create a sense of intensity)

 

Then the music goes back on in a Flash and we are going to have a pan of the trophies to emphasise I'm create meaning to the fact that she is a good writer and she wins trophies but we don't know how good she is until we have a close up of the words and scripted in the trophy.

 

The music continues to play. She is the best, even perfect, winner close up of the middle trophy. It is going to be closed but intends to close up. 

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The music suddenly stops and we can hear clear leave the conversation Harper is having with her mum

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•  The camera angle doesn't change a lot during the conversation. The dialogue is going to be added now. The dialog continues for a couple of shots in which we change the position of the camera to show a better view of  her face. 

 

In the next shot we have a shot of herself putting the horse riding shoes to show what kind of horse riding boots she has they're supposed to be designer,  but even if the audience doesn't understand their point of view it can also make them think that she's ready to ride it she's getting ready then she puts on her helmet.

 

The music doesn't stop  after the conversation with the mum the music starts once she  starts to put her  boots on. 

 

I have to admit that maybe in the extract it won't be that it clear that Harper  comes from a wealthy family given that I had to edit some things out to make it look more simple I realised it is harder to create a whole atmosphere about someone,  this is why I decided to focus more in the actual horror aspect of the film instead of the whole background of heartburn that's why I deleted the conversation she had with her mum and oh so with deleted scenes in which  we saw all the trophies Harper received and word said for the best  horse rider.

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Then she's going to ride the horse she's going to have a moment of writing but very fast moments then suddenly we're going to hear this breathing and we don't know where it's coming from but it's not something new we had heard it before now it's it louder it is like something is coming,  after that end with a very sudden move Harper is going to see something  but we don't know what it is because even if the music has been tense all the way until this point we don't know why it's  tense  so that create even more tension for the audience then the horse gets spooked and  Harper  photos of the horse and lands  terrified she doesn't know what happened.

 

 she quickly stands up and starts running and a few seconds later we see a man chasing her running after her

 

eventually she ends up falling but thankfully she doesn't hurt herself she gets caught by the men who we apparently don't know what he wants but he does say a few things as well as Harper which create a sensation of mystery because they know something we don't know about which could make the audience want to know more about what's happening,  and I might Intrigue them enough to watch the whole film.