FEEDBACK

In Class they gave me a lot of information to make my blog even better than it was, by improving the plot and story line. In my new plot I have changes almost completely everything in my opinion to the better, I erased the dog and I reduced the characters to only have one teenager girl, the mum through the phone,  and finally there is the psychopath. The horses will appear in the extract but they are not actors, they are just like the background. But I will show in the characters profile what  the horses/ horse has to do.  They told me to take the horse out of the equation so I did. They also told me if all of this was going to fit in a 2 min long video so after a while I reconsidered and decided to change a few detail as well as the focus, Instead of focusing directly on Harper I decided to go on a further global view, of everything. 

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